あなたの家から私の家まで遠いから夜道を独りぼっちで帰るのは正直淋しいのよね。
と言いたいのです。
Your home far way from my home.so i feel lonly go back way home by myself.
手直しをお願いします。

Because your house is far from my house, I feel lonly (or scare) when I go home alone. 　

telling the truth, going(walking) home alone from your place at night is a bit lonely. 　

Honestly, it makes me feel lonely going home from your place at night all by myself ’cuase it’s so far away. 私だったらこういうかな。