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free editing service
by KC from 無回答 2022/07/03 20:54:08

Hello!

I have tutored English for more than five years. In addition to my BA in Psychology from UBC, I received 8.5 out of 9 on IELTS and 1560 on the SAT.

I would like to gain some experience in editing and give back to my community. If there is a piece of writing you would like me to take a look at, feel free to send it to me. I will check your grammar, spelling, and sentence structures. I may make minor changes to improve the writing’s clarity and coherence. The service is free of charge.

If your writing is too long, I may only edit a portion of it.

If you are interested, please contact me. Thanks!

Res.1 by 無回答 from 無回答 2022/07/04 13:38:37

日本人の方?それともこちらで生まれ育ったカナダ人の方?
どちらですか?
Res.2 by 無回答 from 無回答 2022/07/18 12:51:31

Hey everyone!

You shouldn't ask this Chinese dude for help because he isn't really helping you but only collecting your documents and making some meaningless comments and trying to give you a difficult time.

If you need some help with proofreading and fixing your documents, try to look for professional help who genuinely does the actual work.

Never use any kind of free service because they are not doing it for free and wasting your time.

Come Experience yourself!
Res.3 by KC from 無回答 2022/07/18 13:04:06

Hello,

To the person who made this post, I am sorry that my service did not meet your expectations.

To be fair, the poster of this comment requested that I shorten the content on his PowerPoint slides. It appears to be an assignment, and I believe it should be the student's responsibility to work on this task alone.

Furthermore, because the content is mostly plagiarised, it does not qualify for my free editing service. However, I gave him a paraphrasing example to demonstrate how to avoid plagiarism and academic dishonesty.

I do not collect papers. My sample works have all been properly referenced or have my students' permission.

Best of luck to you.
Res.4 by 無回答 from 無回答 2022/07/18 13:14:35

Everyone who contacts this guy is looking for a solution. if they can do it for themselves, they don't hire you to work or they can find some professional tutor to resolve their issues.

Don't waste time with this guy.
Forget about plagiarism, everyone has to search online to get information to write a new topic and most of them who has difficult challenges in writing. I think you don't understand people's struggles.

You should shut down your ad posts and I will tell all my international friends not to use your services.
Res.5 by KC from 無回答 2022/07/18 15:44:48

Hello once more, K.

I hope you do not mind if I call you by the first letter of your first name. Interestingly, our first names start with the same letter, don't they?

Based on your comments, I believe I may have offended you during our conversations. I sincerely apologize.

I understand. I understand how difficult it can be to write in English. At times, English grammar can be peculiar. The research process can be time-consuming, and paraphrasing is not something that can be learned overnight. It is, however, possible with enough practice.

I might have been too harsh when I told you two things:

"I help my students and clients avoid unintentional plagiarism by proofreading and editing their work. I do not, however, edit deliberate plagiarism because it constitutes academic dishonesty."

"Lastly, I will not shorten your content into point forms. You, as a student, are responsible for this task. "

Please understand that I was simply stating facts. Those statements were never meant to insult you, but they certainly came across as such. I am sorry if what I wrote hurt your feelings.

Whatever you decide, I hope you understand that plagiarism is a serious problem that should not be ignored. If a student is caught plagiarizing another's work, he or she will almost certainly receive a zero or be expelled from school.

Furthermore, K, you have the ability to complete this task. I enjoy your writing style. Your sentences and word choices are precise. You have also spent significant time creating and polishing your PowerPoint presentation. So far, you are doing well. Your English reading and writing will improve over time, and you will feel more at ease and comfortable living in Canada.

Concerning my service, I would like to clarify that it is free editing and proofreading. It works like this: a person can send me a draft of his or her work. I can look over it to ensure grammatical correctness and, if necessary, improve diction. For example, a man asked me to review his 150-word cover letter. I fixed his grammatical errors and used some formal words to make his letter more professional.

Your request was more extensive, asking if we could meet via Zoom or message through WhatsApp to discuss how to shorten and summarize the content of your 33-slide PowerPoint presentation. One of your slides had 238 words, and I showed you an example of how to paraphrase it. Unfortunately, that kind of work necessitates us taking a class together, which I cannot provide for free.

Concerning your decision not to recommend me to your international friends, I respect your decision and will say nothing further. We all have free will, and I sincerely hope you and your friends will find another more capable person to assist you on your study abroad journey.

Still, if you want me to proofread and edit your presentation speech, I will gladly help you, just like what I promised you in our email.

For everyone else who has seen this, I apologize for any potential issue this may have caused. I will understand if the moderator wishes to remove this post.

For those who are interested in my sample works, please visit the following Google document:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cozYO7B4HGGS_FwRnNXEbPfgjUwuSE_SpT4sdfzHHX8/edit?usp=sharing

And, just in case it matters, I was born in Taiwan and have been a Canadian citizen for almost ten years.

Kyle
Res.6 by 無回答 from 無回答 2022/07/18 17:54:20

I would write “it is” instead of “it’s” as this is an academic level writing, I believe.
>Nobody should have to tolerate any kind of abuse, whether it's physical or emotional, from their significant other.

That is so true that plagiarism is not allowed and acceptable no matter what. 💯 agree with it. It is a common sense.

Also, this person’s English seems very professional and accurate. I think you two had some miscommunications because you were not talking face to face.
(you do not know each other’s tone)

I might send you an email when I need your help:)

M
Res.7 by KC from 無回答 2022/07/18 18:16:02

Hello M,

I agree with you on the "it is" part. I created that piece to apply for a job as a content writer. Content writing is more geared toward a broad audience. Personally, I prefer not to use pronoun contractions because they can lead to careless errors.

I agree with you about K and me miscommunicating. Indeed, it is difficult to determine a person's underlying intention without the tone.

Thank you for your feedback. Let me know if there is anything I can do for you.

Kyle
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