Part time at cafe
by
Hanna
from
無回答 2020/10/27 23:00:09
I’m looking for a job at cafe.
I worked at hotel for one year and half.
And I have a experience with working as cashier for one year.
I’m a university student in Vancouver, so I have work permit for two more years.
In my opinion, her writing is understandable but it has a lack of excellence. I suggest that she mentions what exactly she did while she was working for the hotel in a job interview.
Communication is not all about language so working with native English speakers doesn’t prove that the person in this environment is a great English speaker.